Ode to Fireworks

2021 Handbook

2021 Test A English · Question 37 of 57

Passage Ode to Fireworks

Ode to Fireworks

In autumn my mother drove us to the edge of the field
where the fair was set up year after year:
the carousel, the bumper cars, the long, low sheds
filled with prizewinning animals.
We—my sister, my cousin, and I—were ready for bed,
already in our pajamas. This was a treat we waited
all year for. We waited in the darkness
for the first low, dull thwumps, like someone
beating an old, filthy rug hung on a wash line.
Then we counted the seconds between the lightning
and thunder, as we also used to do, until the sky
lit up: red, blue, green, gold. In my mind’s eye
I can still see the straggly, ancient oak whose branches
reached up past the exhibition halls, silhouetted
against the spectrum of stars that cascaded behind it.

It was one thing to look up into the sky
and imagine yourself in it or to make out pictures
among the clouds, which my sister liked to do.
No, I would tell her, that cloud
does not look like an elephant, a hat, an umbrella.
But it was another thing to see
the sky at night written upon
with those jewels. (We lived in the country:
night was night.) All around us, crickets
stridulated in the stubble of what had been
somebody’s cornfield, their song rising and falling.
You could smell winter on the air’s edge.

Now, in the city, when the sky dips into shadow
at New Year’s or on the Fourth of July, I find myself
craning my neck upward at odd moments.
The city sky is always lit up. This is where we live now,
and it is how we live now, awash in light
of every hue. Everything is a constant celebration:
picking up washing at the cleaner’s or stopping by
the corner market for a loaf of heavy bread.
And the music around me is the music of people,
their voices rising and falling in a hundred languages.
But beneath the yellowish glow deep in the sky
of all our city lights pelting out into the universe,
I remember the feel of the pickup truck bumping
across the ridged field, as I kept waiting for those
childhood bursts, watching as they escorted us home.

Question

What impact does the phrase “Everything is a constant celebration” (line 33) have in the poem?

  • AIt reveals that the speaker finds the city more pleasurable than the country.
  • BIt suggests that the persistent brightness of the city can be overwhelming to the speaker.
  • CIt implies that what is normal in the city was unusual in the country.
  • DIt emphasizes the hectic pace of daily life in the city.
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Correct answer: C

The question asks what impact the phrase “Everything is a constant celebration” (line 33) has in the poem.

A. Incorrect. The speaker describes a sense of happiness and contentment in both the city and the country and does not indicate that one setting is more pleasurable than the other.

B. Incorrect. The word “celebration” has a positive association and does not imply that the speaker is overwhelmed in the city. Throughout the third stanza (lines 28–42), the speaker conveys appreciation for the elements of the city that make it different from the country (“And the music around me is the music of people, / their voices rising and falling in a hundred languages” [lines 36–37]).

C. CORRECT. From the speaker’s perspective, the constant light (“awash in light” [line 32]) contributes to the speaker’s feeling that, in the city, celebratory fireworks are ever present. In comparison, fireworks lit up the country sky only for celebratory occasions or annual events (“In autumn my mother drove us to the edge of the field / where the fair was set up year after year” [lines 1–2]).

D. Incorrect. While the speaker observes many things going on in the city at a given moment, the “constant celebration” in line 33 is intended to convey a comparison to the speaker’s previous experience in the country rather than emphasize the hectic pace of life in the city. The continual light and sounds in the city remind the speaker of lights and sounds experienced only on occasion in the country.

Question analysis

This question about word choice in a poem asks what impact the phrase “Everything is a constant celebration,” from line 33, has in “Ode to Fireworks.” The speaker, grown up and living in a city, looks back on watching fireworks at a fair in the countryside. Students must interpret a sweeping statement about city life whose tone can be heard in more than one way.

NYS standards
  • 7R4 word meaning and choice
  • 7L5a interpreting allusions
Grade level
Grade 8 reading and task
Compared with grade 7
Above grade 7 Grade 7 students analyze how a phrase shapes a poem’s meaning, often from the nearby lines alone. This one sits in a 42-line poem, and the choices read its tone in sharply different ways, so it must be weighed against the whole poem.
Estimated difficulty
Hard: combines ideas, needs a plan, and has more than one tempting wrong answer.
Evidence
Answered from several paragraphs or stanzas
Reading level
Passage: 379 words (a poem; reading level not measured); question and choices: about grade 8, 68 words.
Students, last 30 days
Not enough answers yet to show (it takes 10).
Why it is hard, traps and wrong answers (shows the answer)

Why it is hard

The line can be heard in several moods, and three choices each take one: delight in the city over the country, strain from too much light, or a hurried pace. None of them needs the earlier stanzas, which is why they tempt; the line’s impact comes from the contrast with a childhood in which the sky lit up once a year. Students who ask what a celebration meant to the child at the fair, rather than how a city feels to them, reach the reading the poem supports.

  1. Reading between the lines major Working it out

    Line 33 never mentions the country; that city life feels like a nonstop version of something once rare must be inferred by setting it against the fair the family “waited / all year for” in stanza 1. (Graesser, Singer & Trabasso, 1994; Kintsch, 1998)

  2. Figurative or literary language moderate Understanding the question

    “Constant celebration” is a metaphor: errands at the cleaner’s and the corner market become a festival because the city sky is “always lit up,” as the country sky was only on fireworks nights. (Graesser, Singer & Trabasso, 1994; Kintsch, 1998)

  3. Evidence in several places moderate Working it out

    The contrast spans the poem, the yearly fair and “night was night” in the first two stanzas against the city “awash in light / of every hue” in lines 32–33. (Kirsch & Mosenthal, 1990; Gorin & Embretson, 2006)

Strategy: Reread lines 31–35 aloud, decide how the speaker feels about the city at this point, and keep only a choice that fits both that feeling and the rest of the poem.

Traps

  • Wrong tone or attitude: Misjudges the tone, attitude or point of view, such as reading admiration as criticism, or taking a character's or subject's feelings for the author's.
  • Reads too much in: A reasonable-sounding conclusion that goes further than the text allows.
  • Twists what the text says: Uses the text's topic and ideas but changes what it says: who did it, how much, when, or why.

The wrong answers, classified

How the questions are analyzed, and the research behind it

Working it out, step by step

  1. Figure out what the question asks

    This asks about the impact of one phrase in the poem. Impact means the effect it has on the poem’s meaning. To see it, compare the city in stanza 3 with the speaker’s childhood in the country. A stanza is a group of lines in a poem, like a paragraph.

  2. Read the phrase in its lines

    Lines 31–33 say “The city sky is always lit up. This is where we live now, / and it is how we live now, awash in light / of every hue. Everything is a constant celebration.” Awash means covered all over. Hue means color. Constant means all the time. The next lines name plain errands, like “picking up washing at the cleaner’s.”

  3. Compare it with the country

    In the country, the fireworks were rare. Lines 6–7 say “This was a treat we waited / all year for.” Lines 23–24 add “(We lived in the country: / night was night.)” That means the night sky was dark. A celebration is a special event that happens once in a while. In the city, the sky is always bright. So everyday city life feels like a fireworks night, which used to come once a year.

  4. Check each choice

    • A does not fit. The speaker never says the city is better. The poem ends with a fond memory of the country.
    • B does not fit. “Celebration” is a happy word. The speaker enjoys the light and “the music of people.”
    • C fits. A bright sky is normal in the city. In the country, it came only on fireworks night.
    • D does not fit. Hectic means busy and rushed. Buying bread sounds calm, and the phrase makes it feel festive, not rushed.

    Watch out: B is tempting because “always lit up” and “awash in light” can sound like too much. But the speaker’s words are warm, not tired or upset.

  5. Choose the answer

    The phrase makes city life sound like a fireworks night that never ends. What the city has every day was rare in the country. So the answer is C.

Why this answer and not the closest wrong one

B is the closest wrong choice. Both B and C notice that the city is full of light. But B says the light is too much for the speaker. The word “celebration” shows joy, not stress. The phrase gets its meaning from the contrast with the country, where “night was night.” That contrast is C.

The original DOE question

Question 37 as printed on page 57 of the DOE handbook.
As printed in the DOE’s NYC Guide to the Specialized High Schools Admissions Test (SHSAT) for 2022 Admissions, page 57, question 37. Open page 57 of the handbook (PDF)
The passage “Ode to Fireworks” as printed (page 32)The passage “Ode to Fireworks” as printed on page 32 of the DOE handbook.